新疆沙棘原浆价格:是枝裕和生日,谢谢你带给我们慰藉

看电影看到死 看电影看到死 2017-06-06 17:18:10
小大太太
2017-06-07 11:23:18 小大太太

步履不停是我最喜欢的电影?。?!数不清看了多少遍了~

lh563
2018-06-06 00:49:19 lh563

轰轰烈烈是电影,平静如水才是生活

阮大越
2018-06-06 07:54:28 阮大越

孩子们坚韧有力的活下去:“的”误,当为“地”。

阿雨
2018-06-06 08:23:20 阿雨

看到这篇文章的时候正好在听宝石这首歌??!

netwilliam
2018-06-06 09:55:52 netwilliam (贪财好色,一身正气)
孩子们坚韧有力的活下去:“的”误,当为“地”。 孩子们坚韧有力的活下去:“的”误,当为“地”。 阮大越

同,我也不能忍受公号文章中已经泛滥成灾的“的得地”混用现象。

花语
2018-06-06 10:01:03 花语

《无人知晓》,《步履不?!废不?/p>

Owen 姜
2018-06-06 15:43:13 Owen 姜

步履不停 如父如子 海街日记

阿司匹林 徐辉
2018-06-06 21:56:36 阿司匹林 徐辉
步履不停是我最喜欢的电影?。?!数不清看了多少遍了~ 步履不停是我最喜欢的电影?。?!数不清看了多少遍了~ 小大太太

真的好喜欢

北约北约
2018-06-07 09:27:17 北约北约

不刻意强调的绝望才是绝望

Akira
2018-06-07 11:23:21 Akira

大师就是这样的,最爱的日本导演

莫瑞
2018-06-07 16:45:34 莫瑞

耐人寻味才是电影的核心

Eucaly
2018-06-08 08:44:34 Eucaly

如父如子、无人知晓。拍生活的电影很多,但是能把生活拍成电影的很少。

一束古韵
2018-06-08 09:57:22 一束古韵

耐人寻味

双一
2018-06-08 11:56:18 双一

还记得零几年那会吧,木卫二狂推是枝裕和的《步伐不?!?,这么多年过去,是枝裕和不断稳定的出高质量作品,终于算是现在被中国广大观众熟知了,真的是件好事儿。

島城漫步
2018-06-08 12:07:29 島城漫步 (你好 ,hello 。)

生日快乐

wiki
2018-06-08 15:31:34 wiki

谁有微信小号不,收一个,50块 加微信:tiegea

微信:D92413
2018-06-08 16:43:42 微信:D92413 (失恋了,求人安慰)
步履不停是我最喜欢的电影?。?!数不清看了多少遍了~ 步履不停是我最喜欢的电影?。?!数不清看了多少遍了~ 小大太太

我真心不知道为什么男人把处女看得那么重要,难道我不是处女就不能得到你们的珍惜了吗?真心很心寒,明明说好跟我上床就会对我负责的,到头来却是在玩我?失恋的感觉真心不好,求一个真心对我好的人,可以联系我一起聊,聊什么都可以,我需要发泄。

ZiTchen
2018-06-08 16:46:12 ZiTchen

耐人寻味的大师。

xuxu
2018-06-08 18:30:34 xuxu

打倒日本帝国主义

真有上帝
2018-06-08 21:20:43 真有上帝

这几天连续看了步履不停、无人知晓、海街日记、如父如子、比海更深五部,都很喜欢,小偷家族还没有找到。

龙里水库
2018-06-09 01:41:17 龙里水库

写得真好啊

采蘑菇的小姑娘
2018-06-11 17:12:59 采蘑菇的小姑娘

轰轰烈烈,亦是平静生活

书中有云彩
2018-06-11 21:38:58 书中有云彩

但是能把生活拍成电影的很少。

huanhuan
2018-06-13 20:24:57 huanhuan

Besides, in my revised composition, I made a connection between the solution and plea bargainingin each paragraph so as to clarify my main topic. As the below picture shows, in paragraph seven of my final AP, I added a part to illustrate the effectiveness of reducing minimum penalties in curbing prosecutors’ excessive use of plea bargains. In this way, my audience can make a connection between my solution and plea bargaining. Similarly, at the end of paragraph eight, I also added a part to elaborate the link between this solution and the reduction of plea bargaining practice.

Thesis Statement:
Based on what I revised in my structure and my content, I also altered my thesis statement to a stronger one, which makes my solution more specific. As can be seen in the following picture, compared with my original thesis in the partial AP draft, I specified my solution to the reduction of some non-violent and non-serious crimes from felonies to misdemeanors, which makes the solution more specific.

CONCLUSION
Through the course of WR 39C, I learned a lot about how to compose a good argumentative paper by using valid argument and multi-modal elements. Through this course, I also had the opportunity to learn how to efficiently do research and select the most useful and timely sources. After the two multi-modal compositions, I realized there was still a long way to go for me to become a good writer. Based on the feedback and my reflection, I realized that my ability to correctly use citations and accurately analyze these sources needed to be improved. Besides, I also need to pay more attention to carefully organize my structure and stay focus on my topic so that my readers would not be confused. What I have learned in the course of WR 39C would benefit me in my future writing, and I have my professor to thank the most. From the very beginning, I find WR 39C course would be a challenge, and I determined to commit myself to learning. I know that I made a lot of mistakes throughout the two compositions, but with the help and guidance of my peers and my professor, I made great progress and I became more confident in my writing.

huanhuan
2018-06-13 20:26:19 huanhuan

At the very beginning of my writing classes at UCI, I get the feeling that the college-level writing would be challenging and intimidating. To tell the truth, i have always find writing is a challenging task and sometimes it racks my brain to come up with a good paper. I love reading and i admire those writers who can come up with such elegant and compelling articles. I believe the reading would be a good habit for me to learn how to become a good writer. When i was in high school, i sometimes would copy some beautifully structured sentences in my notebook and when i would read them on occasion. I get the feeling that deep down, i want to become a good writer. So when i started the WR 39B, i took this as a great opportunity to improve my writing skills. However, throughout WR 39B, i find some of the writing tasks are quite difficult, especially when it comes a 2000 words length paper. As i have never been assigned to such a long essay, so I am a little confused how am i going to do this. After WR 39B course, i learned rhetorical analysis, and how to write a long paper with logically and clearly arranged structure. The writing skills i learned in WR 39B helped me a lot in the course of WR 39C in terms of arrange my structure. So the HCP and AP seem less intimidating for me as i am confident that i can handle a paper that is about ten pages.
COMPOSING PROCESS
When the HCP came, I did not write until I did enough research on my topic as I believed that the sufficient research would help me to select more useful and accurate information about my topic. So before I get started writing, I spent a lot of time on the internet and library in an effort to select the most relevant, reliable, and timely sources. The online database was my most consulted source platform because I found it made the whole research process become effective. Based on my topic, I narrowed down at least ten sources that could be used in my paper. More important, the following-up tasks of source evaluation is of an important step for me to get a closer look at the usefulness of these sources. After the evaluation, I found several sources were practically focusing on the same theme, so I only kept the most timely and comprehensive one.
Based on what I researched, I started my HCP, which at the very first beginning is not as hard as I expected. I applied the writing strategies that I learned in my WR 39B to my HCP. First, I started with an outline, which I believed would help me to keep a clear mind of what I am about to write in each section so that I would not lose my track. As it shows in the following picture, I divided my HCP partial draft into five parts, which include the introduction, plea bargaining and prosecutorial discretion, implications of the prevalent use of plea bargaining, counterargument, and conclusion. I think this preparatory step is very important as this outline serves as a map helping me to focus on my ideas. Based on the sources, I find the following writing process much more fluent.
I followed the same step in my AP partial draft after I did thorough research on the possible solutions to the problem of mass incarceration due to the sentencing disparity, I started to draw up an outline for my AP assignment. As can be seen in the following picture, I divided my paper into five four sections, which includes the introduction, solution: reforming the law, counterargument, and conclusion. In each section, I furthered divided section 2 into several paragraphs according to the central idea of each paragraph.

小乙
2018-06-14 21:54:11 小乙 (写作放飞灵魂,笔和吉他都很摇滚)

《三度嫌疑人》是被严重低估的好片?。?!

淘淘巴巴
2018-07-04 09:42:12 淘淘巴巴
同,我也不能忍受公号文章中已经泛滥成灾的“的得地”混用现象。 同,我也不能忍受公号文章中已经泛滥成灾的“的得地”混用现象。 netwilliam

在再不分才是最难受的


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